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Love it

"I like where it's going. "

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You a mean one

"What a cliffhanger this was a great story I like the way it had an upbeat tempo. I was very intrigued on what was gonna happen next. and now, as I sit on the edge of my seat …this cliffhanger! you’re killing me and it’s the day before Christmas Eve. OK Mr. Grinch "

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Great Story

"I am really enjoying this story. The character development so far has kept me hooked. I looking forward to continuing reading it."

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Avid reader

"Very good imagination and book. Love the story and hope their is more. Great wring and very few errors. Keep up the wonderful story."

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claimed by the alpha

"this book is really good I hope the waiting time to get to read the next chapter doesn't take to long I am ready to finish this book and start another book "

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Claimed by the alpha

"So far this book has me hooked. I cannot stop reading it"

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Really good story hope it has a nice ending

"Really good story hope it has a nice ending"

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Claimed by the alpha

"Very exciting so far. Cant wait to read rest of book"

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Great read

"Very good book with a twist as the alpha is female instead of the usual male!"

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Lovely

"Its such a lovely book i love the characters and i will recommend this book to my friend "

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Good story

"It's good that for once the lead Actor is a girl and not the obvious Boy must be Alpha."

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claimed by the alpha

"like the plot but the writing can use some work some sentences I have to read over to understand what was said or done; some words dont fit other then that I like it and would love to read some more. "

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I'm not sure

"Some of the grammatical errors are very bad. Entire words missing. Definitely need to fix those. "

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Claimed by the alpha

"Interesting story line "

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Claimed by the alpha

"The story is following a predictive pathway...the origin or background for the Mate is coming but the tension build-up is fairly muted right now....the aggression level for the vampires is also tame....they appeared to be stronger and more capable than the wolves"

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Claimed by the alpha

"The story is ok so far but there are so many grammatical errors that it sometimes makes it difficult to read. "

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The claim of 5he alpha

"I love the novel, it is well punctuated even though there are grammatical errors her and there, it is worth an eye. "

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I wish we could have at least 12 more chapter written but overall this is the best story I have read in a while

"Did not dislike anything in the book hate that there are no more chapters wish I could get 12 more if the book was fully written and had a total of 200 to 400 chapters I would send a bunch of money to get this published"

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