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Vgrgsf

"What I like about this novel is its done better than any o read and that's a lot but I like the witch and her kids "

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Wonderful😍

"I liked the continous suspense, couldn't put my phone down, wanted to keep reading.💫"

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Amazing story

"i would recommend this book to everyone and I love this book so much when I read this book for the first time I instantly got hooked the story is so entertaining "

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Great story

"Fantastic story my only complaint is I wish it was longer. I love the characters and how they developed and the way they worked through life. But I genuinely believe that this could be made into a bigger story if tou wanted to. And i definitely would read it if tou did. Either way Fantastic story, thank you for sharing 😊 "

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Call of freedom

"I love this book because I am obsessed with the supernatural, I liked the fact that there really was no villain and that the witch was just as much as a victim as everyone else. This book really shows that there is always two sides to every story."

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Good stuff

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Come back

"It is a witch!!"

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Call of freedom

"Great book! Tho I do wish you would update more often, I still love it! ❤ Keep up the good work 👍"

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Lexi

"Liked the story......."

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I love it!❤️

"Really really good❤️"

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The alpha rogue

"This is a good book to read, keeping you on your toes. It makes you want to know what's next. I would recommend this book to anyone it's really nice. I have downloaded the app and since I like alpha book's it was my first choice. "

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Good book

"Keep writing you are a great writer"

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Amazing

"I loved the characters,the plot,the storyline, basically everything about the story you just have minor spelling errors but keep up the good work and keep the updates coming. 😊😁😄"

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It's amazing

"Please update fast...I just can't wait for another chapter "

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Good just wanting the ending

"I am confused about the witches but I understand why it's there I just wish they made more sense and I want to know what happens to the pack"

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I absolutely LOVE this book!

"It's filled with humor that made me laugh, which is something I look for in a book. It is chock-full of drama. Kudos to the author who tries their best to correct their mistakes and handles criticism very well! I have literally no idea how to write a review. XD"

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Rogues mate

"The book is very good there is enough suspension that makes you want to keep reading "

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Took a while. But its a great story so far

"This is a very cute book so far"

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Love it

"Almost at the end I hope the ending is just as thrilling as the beginning 😍 so invested already. "

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Great

"Really great so far, everything it perfect. I wish updates would come sooner. I love this story, the plot keeps you hooked. You just need to sort out a few spelling errors."

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