Corin Zaylen
"Sir, his vitals look good. Do you think he's ready?" A man, wearing a ventilated protection suit asked into a walkie talkie. It took a bit for the other guy to respond, but then he said "Begin."
Then i woke up, sweaty and hot. I was wrapped in my sheets, only my feet showing. "What.." I was unable to grasp, what my dream was. I sighed, as i got up and shut off my alarm.
As i had shut off my alarm, i looked into my mirror. Staring at my creamy complexion, as well as my little spritz of freckles. I stared back into my baby blue eyes (slightly pink on the top), and ran a quick hand into my wavy, blonde hair. Even if i did look good, i still didn't like myself. I don't know what it was, i just didn't.
I pulled out a off the shoulders top, a black tank-top, and my usual wavy, pink skirt. Then i looked into the mirror as i applied a bit of lip-gloss and eyeliner/mascara. I thought "Well, i'm not exactly pretty, but it'll do." I headed down the stairs, seeing a note on the fridge.
Dearest, Corin.
Hiya sweetie, i'm heading into work early.
I want you to know that i love you,
and i hope you have a good day at school.
Love, Mom.
I sighed as i had finally gotten to school, i saw the boy i liked and my heart froze. I quickly, went over to the side and watched him go inside. I let out the breath i was holding in and calmly got out of the corner, heading inside. I sighed and headed upstairs, to my locker. I reached it, and unlocked it using my comb. I put my bag in my locker, grabbed my stuff and quickly headed to class, i then accidentally bumped into someone and fell on them. I then sat up a bit, and realized it was the guy i was into.
I gasped softly, got up and pulled him up with me. "A-are you okay?" I had a soft, almost feminine tone for a male. He smiled at me "Yeah, i'm okay. Are you?" He gently reached out and touched my face. "You have a bruise there, it looks really bad." I felt my face flush at his contact.
I moved away from his hand. "I-it's nothing, really.." He gave a concerned look. "Are you sure?" his tone was calm and gentle, and soothing. I felt my face heat up more
Hi there,
I just finished your story and it’s still on my mind. Your characters and emotions felt so real, I was hooked!
I can totally see it as a comic,your storytelling is very visual and emotional. I’m a freelance artist and would love to bring your story to life as a comic.
No pressure, just wanted to share! If interested, you can reach me here:
𝗗𝗜𝗦𝗖𝗢𝗥𝗗: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)
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𝗘𝗠𝗔𝗜𝗟: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)
Best, Lizzie