What is your opinion?
Sin for me
"I love the story so far it is amazing the plot is good and the characters is inspiring looking forward to finish it"
It grabs your attention, for sure!
"This was one heck of a ride. It's thrilling and grabs your attention. At its very core, it's enticing! I loved it! It pulls you in at the best moments and it leaves you wanting to read more every time! This is one of those novels that really has potential to go places. I'm impressed at how well you kept the interest going and are not lacking on plot and lacking on the writing. It's not often you find something so enjoyable like this. I will definitely be recommending this to other reads. Great job! I think you'll go places in life, if you keep doing what you're doing! :) great work!"
Good Read
"This took me a while due to having tons of other things going on but I must say it was well written and an easy story to follow. The plot started off slow but as you read more you slowly get pulled into the story."
Great book!
"It’s has been awhile since I’ve read a unique kind of story. They are hard to find. It was definitely one heck of a ride! The plot is amazing. Just needs a bit of smoothing out to make it shine a little more. The only thing I have to say, is that a little more dialogue between characters. It helps to be able to connect to them more. Great job! "
Good History, a promising future
"It seems an interesting story that starts from something simple but as you develop the plot becomes more intense and complex. The development of language is correct, I would like the narrative to have more dialogues between the characters, more interaction between them to make sense to the novel. When we stop being the narrator and let the characters take their own life we achieve perfection. In fact, it is a good story and has a promising future. Good luck"
