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Such a great story

"Really good plot and the characters are interesting. There are lots of punctuation errors, some typos, and terms used incorrectly (you’re vs your), but all in all, it’s an easy read. Can’t wait to see where this goes!"

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Awesome

"It is an awesome book .Please bring a part 2 . 😊"

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Dark

"Its just so good I can't stop reading it good work author. "

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Quite the mystery

"Very gripping"

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Loved it

"Loved every minute of it it had very good plot to it"

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Dark

"I really loved it. Awesome storyline. "

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Dark

"I realy enjoyed this book. I wish they would have gave more of the story on how mark created dark. But i overall enjoyed it."

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Dark

"Engrossing storyline. Suspense all through.a bit confusing though about mark and dark.Luna a victim of circumstances.the author brings out the characters well with vivid description."

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Mystery and a good book

"Mystery and a good book"

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Dark

"This was an interesting story, I'm not sure Dark was a demon, maybe the dark side of Mark? Manifested? I felt the ending was abrupt, but very readable. "

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Ok book

"Needs work"

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Dark

"Not bad at all. Nice writing style. Not a lot of error. Not to dull, not to fast. "

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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwww

"Ee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee"

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