Inkitt
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Brilliant

"I like the story i came here from wattpad pls update"

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The billionaire stepsister

"Great book really love the plot and how thangs are heating up. Don’t like the dad to much how you going to beat a man in his 20’s. But overall love the book keep writing your amazing."

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Awesome

"Great story "

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Getting better

"I don't like marcello attitude some of the time or natalie's own.i will tell my friends about it"

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Billionaires step sister

"Cannot wait to read next chapter"

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Interesting

"When is the next chapters coming, you left your reader hanging, please update soon"

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The billionaire stepsister

"I love the storyline and the writer's plot good story so far"

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its ok

"confusingish but ok "

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The billionaire's stepsister

"I really didn't like the asshole xavier and his disregard for his kids and family and u recommend it to my friend maggie and i chose that rating because i like the story and think the writer is doing a fairly good job"

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Billionaire step sister

"Short novel"

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