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Please write another story

"Could you maybe write another story like this? Like a sequel? Ooh, it should be about Prince Caspian, or The Horse and his Boy, which you've obviously read. I read them too. I really loved this story, and it's sad that it's over. A sequel would really make my day. Love your writing!"

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