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Abide in darkness

"Excellent!🙌🏻🙌🏻"

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Okay read

"Wonder if she let Caleb go to next base with her."

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It was very nice and interesting story

" I like the plot and entire story but as well there were some grammatical errors which need s to be corrected."

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Very good

"I love everything "

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Daze (black flames)

"Very good read, grabs your attention and buckles you up for the ride. I was very pleased from start to finish"

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Interesting, but rough

"There are plenty of grammatical errors and spelling errors. The plot feels disjointed between so many characters so quickly, and many have nothing to do with each other. I don't really feel attached to any of them yet, but I am willing to see where the story goes."

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Hey

"Is there another book? "

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