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Good Read

"I can't wait for the next installment. "

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Bound by duty

"The storyline was Great & exciting! Couldn’t put it down! I had a problem a few times understanding what characters we’re talking , who they were talking to & what situations or events they speaking of. Ex when Caroline said “ yr Dad is here” yet when she got downstairs she says “Grandpa” re-read it a couple of times because sometimes we readers may have missed something! I still Don’t know how Caroline got hurt was it the knife that was thrown was that blood Becky’s or hers or was it the building collapsing on her or did the other fraction get to her and her hurt her?"

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I love this!!!!

"I love this book! Hooks you from the very beginning. Can’t wait to finish it!!"

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Great for lockdown reading

"BD Vyne is a writer to look out for. The author avoided most of the cliches of the vampire genre. I think people pay to read this interesting story once edited. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment. "

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Bound by duty

"Wonderful book I hope there is more coming, would recommend "

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Bound by Duty

"Riveting, Pleasesay there are more chapters LoL"

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Bound By Duty

"I like the story, it's relatable in the since mom is overwhelmed. Cee wants to do what she thinks is right. Alton wants her for real and she to blind to see over her insecurities. I am liking how the stiry is playing out"

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Bound by duty

"I enjoy vampire and paranormal stories. This one is a little different. But at least the vampires do not SPARKLE. Would like to see more from this aujthor. "

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Okay

"I wish it didn't make u do this everytime..I like to do it at the end"

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