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Really good story👍🏽

"I like how it stands up too sexism and I love the story so far. It's a bit too formal and and some punctuation mistakes "

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It is a nice romantic book. Kept me hooked on after a very long time.

"Good story line. Thus is a good book. It kept me hooked after a long time. Looking forward to read further. Good work"

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Better than you

"I like the strong female lead. I like how the author wrote the story so far. So far so good."

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Soccer Friends or Foes

"I find the book very entertaining. I have a teenage daughter, who plays soccer who I would recommend them up to."

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Love it

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Great so far!

"A few missing words here and there but easy to read so far. The characters seem great. I wish i could know what Bryce is thinking! Lol but so far so good"

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"This book is skillfully written. You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App."

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Worth reading

"Author’s way of storytelling is so good, I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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Love

"Love it.... It's intriguing "

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Amazing

"Let me just say that the only reason why the plot got 4 stars is because I haven't been able to get to the most existing stuff just yet. I'm really enjoying this book, it's great!! :)"

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Really good story

"Really good story, endearing characters. I really like the author's writing style. "

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OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!

"This book is amazing. I laugh with like, every chapter. The sense of humour, the rivalry, the hate-love... and the vibes of reality, this book has it all. For God's sake, please continue this book; it hasn't been updated even after years. I NEED to read on."

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Better than you

"I am really enjoying this so far the dynamic between the two and the explanation of how it came to be is really good. Maddy also comes across as real not a stereotypical gal & I can’t wait until we get to know the characters more. I would suggest adding in what positions they play, I don’t know though that’s just a soccer pet peeve I like to know what they play. But honestly so far super good. Are you planning on writing any chapters form Bruce’s POV or are we get the story solely from Maddy’s view? I think alternating POVs could be something fun to consider."

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I loved it!!!

"I loved the story so far because it keeps going on about how she dislikes Bryce and than it seems like they are starting to fall for each other."

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Amish

"I like the plot of the story because it's seems like an everyday situation because there is so much competition between the two genders I totally recommend this book"

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I love it

"The plot is really nice and I enjoy reading this book."

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Better than you

"Like the story how they use to be friends but how they have mine fight but they become to see that they can work great together "

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Better Than You

"I smiled the whole time I read this book. Great humor and a nice way of seeing things. I have loved the story so far. The author's writing is so nice to read. The thoughts of the main character are so relatable. Can't wait for the next chapter!"

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Good story

"Love story so far but was easier to read on wattpadd so i think I'll stick to that format to read your work. Great job "

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