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PERFECT!!!

"So good! The only thing I would mention is that it is hard for me to see Percy drunk because of his trauma with Gabe and all that. But overall, it's super great."

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"Amwoalskslwlw"

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Our Bedroom After the War

"I really loved the plot. I can appreciate that the author showed Percy and Annabeth struggling because at the end of the day, i they would never just be able to bounce back to their normal regular selves. "

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I love this

"I really loved this story. It feels real and honest. You can relate to the characters (not that I have the same expierience as them bc hell I have not). But it's easy to understand them and their actions. I also like the writing style, it's good and comfortable to read. Btw the end was perfect."

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literally ate

"slayyyyyyyy"

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Awesome Book

"I loved reading this book it was awesome."

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IDK what to put as a title

"Ok. It is honestly a well written story. There are few authors who are able to capture angst, darkness, and grief in a story and you have done it beautifully in my opinion. I think that the fight between Percy and Annabeth should have been a bit more intense and angsty and take up a bit more than a chapter and a half, but besides that i really like this story and would recommend it to anybody who likes Percy Jackson."

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Oh my Gods

"I just loved this story. Especially the ending. Most fanfictions change everyone's personality's but your story just brings them out and makes us love the characters even more. What can I say, it's a lovely story"

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Amazing and beautiful.

"I loved the writing style the most it felt like I was reading Shakespeare (and I don't even like Shakespeare!!) or something, but the in the best way. The wording and the way you've described everything made me feel unnnbbdjdjhsjsk. As it's obvious I don't have any words. Also I feel like the way the book is written, people could read it without reading the series, which is both very unusual and difficult for fanfictions. I would recommend it to ever person I know if I could because it's just that could. Basically it's the best book I've read in a long time."

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most amazing thing created

"I love the stoys plot and story line throughout the story, seeing all their struggles and how theu overcome them. I love the ending so much and I think it was one of the best ways this story could come to an end! The writing style was amazing an I was loved every second of the story!"

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Beautiful writing and incredible plot!

"I just finished this story and I was incredibly impressed! The writing is beautiful and has the perfect balance of dialogue and thoughts, and a really nice flow. I love the emphasis on the importance of being there for the people who need you, and I thought it gave the story depth and complexity. I love the ending, it’s creative and I didn’t see it coming, yet it still fits perfectly with the plot! The only criticism I can come up with is that the transition from Percy and Anabeth being extremely depressed to finding out how to push through together, was a bit quick and strained; it kinda felt like one second they are struggling to find a reason to live, and then everything is fine. Overall, fantastic story, I could relate to so much of what the characters were feeling, and ending with the realization that they are not struggling alone was perfect. This is undoubtedly the best Percy Jackson fanfic I have read!"

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so.freaking.good

"this story was so amazing!!! Its honestly one of the best fanfics Ive read ever. Their characters are soooo right like to a t its like if rick rioridan wrote this himself its so good. Honestly in my mind at least I almost treat it as canon its that good. Thank you author very very much! "

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Really good writing.

"This is honestly got to be one of the best fan fiction stories I’ve read. The plot is so down to Earth and relatable. It doesn’t go into the Greek myth but dives into the trauma that these two have gone through and really show the human side that we really didn’t see as much in the books. Five out of five even though there are some grammar and writing mistakes."

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Our bedroom after war

"Awesomeeeee !!!! And the end, it was just so perfect I loved it "

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Soooo good

"Great job!!"

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You can get a published book. Not even kidding.

"This book is amazing. So beautiful yet so sad, has so many emotions and feelings. "

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Awesome

"I love this book it is get good!! I wish it didn't have to wns, and the ending was get clever!!"

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Impeccable

"The best written fabric i have read so far"

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Awesome

"This was the best story I have show today!"

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Amazing

"I've read this over and over again and it's always just as amazing as it was the first time! This is one of the greatest things I've ever read! "

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