Unique and Interesting

"The Last Page Turner was a journey back to middle school - as a teacher, I can relate to the bullies and the bullied. I enjoyed the descriptions, especially that of the library. There were some errors but nothing that was a serious issue, although there was a repeated chapter (the introduction of Sherry). I like the poster of the Cheshire Cat being the transport vehicle, and I found it interesting your use of names - Sherry, Scheherazade, Dewey, Dewey Decimal System/Librarian. Good way to end the last chapter. Although the pacing was a little rushed, you have a lot of potential. A very unique story. Some advice: don't get caught up in revision - plunge ahead and write, write, write! Always be writing! Good luck! -- Brittanny Davis"