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Amazing but unfinished

"Hopefully it will be finished because it’s a great book but I don’t think so but all well wishes to the author."

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Simply Amazingly Agonizing

"The book is incredible. The author takes her time to tell a gut-wrenching story of an abused Omega Wolf. This is one of my favorite books- you can feel the emotion and pain- The growing insanity. I highly recommend it!"

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Roller coaster of emotions

"I have not been able to put this book down from beginning to end. As the chapters progress, my heart races, and all too often I find myself crying for Toby. I thought I knew where the story was heading, and then in steps Aegis and suddenly I have hope this won't end up as a tragedy with the lead going to an abuser...then again, maybe this is second lead syndrome? Who knows...all I know is I am thrilled to be reading and savoring every chapter. "

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Absolute Obedience

"Wonderful. I can feel the frustrations, the conflicts all the characters go through. I like it."

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Very captivating novel

"I love it the novel was beautifuly written loved the characters the author did an amazing job "

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Absolute obedience

"I absolutely enjoyed myself while reading this and I like the plot twists. however I feel like it might end up being overstretched if does not conclude soon, but that shouldn't discourage you, blow us away will you!"

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Obsolute obedienc

"Beautiful story. So much pain, very sad, I wonder if he is going to have his happy ending his heart desire."

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Absolute obedience

"This book was amazing it made me cry and it made me smile. "

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My heart!!!!

"This is literally a rollercoaster ride of trouble, love, trouble, lies, and pain. It's equally great and leaves you feeling different in a way. I can't really explain the feeling that arises when I read this story but all I know is that I can't help but read it, no matter what ends up happening. Throughout the entire story I wished repeatedly for something positive and forever stays positive to happen to dear Toby, because his entire life was really fucked up!! I hope that with anybody else that reads this story feels the same and hope you have a tissue box nearby, just in case😭😭😭😭😏"

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#emotional

"The authors ablity to portray emotion is so good you could feel the emotions of the main character Toby as he goes through multiple tragedies and stressers that hopfully lead to finding his place."

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I love this so much ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🏳️‍🌈

"This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I kinda wish Pierce, Kane, and Toby all got together. But this is an amazing story. I love everything single thing about it. Your an amazing author, ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🏳️‍🌈"

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I will honestly say I don’t think have seen such an intelligent writer like you yet.

"Such an amazing work put together. Are readers this blind if not how come this book haven’t gotten like a million likes? I love this book so much that I will find and download and read all your books you have on Inkitt. Have read a lot of book this doesn’t just entertain you it educates as well. I learnt a thing or two in this amazing work of yours. Season 2 please😁"

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Absolute obedience

"It is a well-thought-out book. I would recommend it for anyone who likes lgbtq + and werewolves."

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Great read

"Really good reading"

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Absolute Obedience

"I read this on Wattpad. The author is very talented and writes a clear story about Toby and hid life. I'd recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good written story about heartache and building one back up gradually. Then this is your story. "

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I LOVE THIS!

"This has been amazing. Toby is so troubled but luckily some see that, he needs guidance and a meaningful purpose."

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Absolute obedience

"Such a good book!"

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I love this book

"The chapters are well thought out, and you can really feel Toby's anxiety and his drive to be good with each words written... Im still team pierce at this point int he book come at me bro! "

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Its the best

"I love this book...so captivating"

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So good!

"Honestly I love this book so much! It’s so good! Keep up the great work!"

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