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Loving it..

"I love the plot so far. I'm so into the novel. I love reading and being a librarian. I always recommend to my students to read different books."

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My Alpha Mate Rejected Me

"Amazing story.Please update soon. I want to read more. "

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My alpha mate rejected me

"I love the story "

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My alpha mate rejected me

"Wow!! Powerful read!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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My alpha mate rejected me

"Want to read the whole book"

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Amazing!!

"This is just wowowowow, loving the story so far!!! And a request pls, I really hope that mf rogue who traumatized and hurt Becca dies the most painful death of the decade, hate that mf moron 😒😒 but i just love rose and Becca personality and charecters!! Keep doing what u live authir, your amazing!!!!!!!"

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V.Shastry

"So far it's good. Let's see what happens next"

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Awesome

"Is a great story "

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My alpha mate rejected me

"So far so good"

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My Alpha Mate Rejected Me

"It is really good and I can't wait for the update. I hope I don't have to wait long for the update. "

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plz notice me!

"first of all, i wanna say i love the story amd i dont like reading a lot i have only read 3 stories till yet im very picky when i comes to reading and i wanna thank u cuz the story is amazing and how u describe emotions are AMAZING i hope u keep uploading here cuz u said "that u upload the story on wattpad and sadly wattpad isn't available in my country " thank u again i purple u :3"

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Gf email ghjj

"Happy happy good "

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"What happened to her adopted sister "

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OK boom

"Nice book for now. Though confusing f characters "

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Rejected by the alpha

"The grammar and word use is hard to read in places. If this is translated into ENGLISH, it would really help to ask a native English speaker to proof read it."

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Is this the end

"It says complete is this the end as it's not told the complete story"

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It's good so far, but

"The plot or storyline actually is good. It just need editing to make it easy to read. Regardless, I undestand the storyline but it will be better if the writing is improved"

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Doesn’t grab your attention

"Hard to read due to lack of fluency."

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Juvenile

"It takes a brave person to put their work out there for others to read and enjoy. In short it sounded more like a hurt teenager. She didn't get plastic surgery but became a famous singer and her family didn't recognize her? Convoluted and confused. "

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