What is your opinion?
I loved it!
"Everything, from the characters to the plot captivated me. You have a gift!"
Good Start!
"What you have here is a very good idea. Your grammar and structuring is very good and far exceed many adults I have seen. You are a diamond in the rough. I have two things I want to point out to you. One is the blurb is very congested, try to free it up a bit and leave more to the reader's imagination so in your case less is more. Another bit of advice here is to focus on the main theme whether you decide if it's her saving the country or something else. The other bit of advice I have for you is making it more realistic. What I mean is typically parents won't let their children leave to save the country unless it's like a norm for people in this country to let their young children go on potentially risky adventures. If that is the case you need to give us more background information on this world. If not work on trying to rework your story where the main lead somehow gets caught up in the disappearance of royalty. But other than that I think you have a lot of potential."
