Modern Day Fairytale
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Modern Day Fairytale

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Summary

Azura is an seventeen year old senior in about to start a new high school. She has to pass her audition in order to get in. Then she meets Edward. Edward has had a crush on Azura since she stood up for him when the Captain of the football team decided to bully him for helping her with her audition. After talking to her at the audition, he learns a few things. He knows that her home life is no fairytale with her dad in the military. Will he tell his crush how he feels or will he graduate and wonder 'what if'?

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Audition

My name is Azura Kioni Gilbert. I'm 17 years old and I'm about to start my senior year of high school. I have black curly hair that stops at my chin, light brown eyes, and skin the color of milk chocolate, or so my aunt tells me.

I can't believe school is about to start in less than a week. That means I have less than a year until I get out of this hellhole I call a home. Ever since my dad married that woman Harper my life has been a living nightmare and her two demon spawns she call children are no better.

Whenever my dad is around, she's the doting stepmother, but when he's not around she's the devil himself. He calls me once a month to check on me and I can never bring myself to tell him the truth about his new wife and her kids. It would break his heart if he knew how evil his wife was.

I sigh as I get up and get ready for school. I shower, brush my teeth and get dressed in under thirty minutes. I take off my bonnet and gently brush my hair until it nice and smooth then grab my backpack to head downstairs. I ignore the glares while walking into the kitchen to grab an orange and head out the door.

My car is in the shop and my stepsisters go to a private school on the other side of town, so I have to make the twenty minute walk to school by myself. I don't mind walking though. It's good exercise and it gives me a chance to relax and enjoy the morning air.

If things go as planned, I will be attending a different school this year. It's called Dillard Academy of Performing Arts. I was originally going to Aurora High, but I had to transfer due to us moving during the summer. Today is my audition. If I pass, then I get to spend my senior year here. If not, then my stepmother is going to make me stay home and work, which is the last thing I want. My talents are singing, viola, piano, and dancing. I'm no Mariah Carey, but I've been told I'm pretty good.

My heart races as I finally make my way onto campus and head towards the auditorium. I let the headmaster know I was ready after I changed into my leotard, skirt and ballet slippers.

"Ms. Gilbert, the stage is yours when you are ready."

The headmaster was pale, 6ft2, with brown hair and blue eyes. You could tell he was first by the way the suit fit him.

Then a red haired guy sat down on the piano. He was very handsome. His red haired brought out his blue eyes, even though he wore glasses. He stood at 5ft10 and had the body of a swimmer. He was dressed in a black button down shirt and white skinny Jean's with black high tops.

I turned slightly and nodded to the pianist and grabbed the microphone.

Ever have the feeling

That something's not right

There are things hidden

But in plain sight

My life's no fairytale

Like everyone believes

I have hidden scars

That may never heal

But my father's love for me is real

My heart aches with sadness

At the loss of my mother

The woman I never knew

But still loved like no other


I finished the small verse and was greeted with silence. I looked into the audience and and gasped when I saw the tears in everyone's eyes. All ten of them.

"That was beautiful Ms. Gilbert. Did you write that yourself?" The headmaster asked.

"Yes sir. It's not completely finished yet." I told him.

"Will you sing it for us when it's finished?" He asked smiling at me.

"I'd be honored sir. Would you like me to continue?" I asked picking up the viola.

He nodded and motioned for me to continue.

Taking a deep breath, I began to play Frank Sinatra's Moonlight Senata. I moved with music and couldn't the smile that spread across my face when I saw the look on the pianists' face. He was awestruck and blushed when he saw me looking at him. Toward the end of the song I played a bit slower and slowly brought it to the end. There was more silence.

The ten people watching me were conversing with each other while I put the instrument away. The guy at the piano gave me a small smile before getting up to leave.

I turned to the judges to wait for the verdict.


Let Aaliyah Nichols know what you thought about this chapter!

Jessy
Jessy

The biggest piece of advice I can give you is to look up the "show don't tell" rule in writing. Your story would be much better with implementing that rule, as it becomes more active, instead of the MC telling me everything I need to know. For example, when she says her dad is in the army and is never home, instead of saying it so bluntly, you could weave it into a conversation she has with someone else, where her friend asks her if her dad again isn't home, and the MC says, "You know him. Probably fighting off soldiers in Iraq." It tells the same thing, but more engagingly, and it also leaves some room for imagination by the reader. The same thing for when she says she is the only black girl: you could have her walking around the school halls and describe how every person she sees is white, and how that makes her stand out. Instead of a passive narrator's voice, you'll have an active and engaging writing style.

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