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Wow
"very nise I will be happy when you leave nice comment to my story like this"
Must Read!
"I gave you 5 stars all round, its a smooth read. As far as punctuation and grammar goes I'm no expert but I know the story flows. I like how you put so much background detail into the stories of your characters so we get to know them and champion them, they are no longer strangers and only wish the best for them moving forward. As for the new villains I cant wait to see how you weave him/them/they into the plot, so pleasssse update soon."
Rating
"This is a good book"
