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In the middle

"Enjoyed the story so far. I would like to read more. I hope updates come quickly..."

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Amazing

"Amazing 💜"

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In the middle

"So far very good. Intriguing sexy and funny."

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In the Middle

"Grammar mistakes. But waiting impatiently for the next chapters. Looking so forward."

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Great

"Great read"

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Spankingly awesome

"Awesome and erotic"

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Must read

"I like this, expecting more"

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Switching things up...?!

"Curious to see where this goes.... Domme meets Dom, gets wet, gets spanked, and then...?"

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I firget

"So fare so good can't wait to find out what happens on Monday "

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Very interesting

"A real page Turner .. "

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Book

"So far i am enjoying the story line. It has good flow to it..looking forward to reading the rest of the story "

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Good

"The story is overall good, but the author takes about 2 to 3 chapters to describe a certain scene and/or a situation, (for example: the scenes between the domme and her sub), as a publisher I would suggest to squeese them all into one chapter and therefore make the chapters longer which is more appreciated. Also updates are verry slow, with all respect to the author, I know how hard it is to be a writer but more frequent updates will give this book more reads and more chances to get published. The story itself is great, it has a good potential to get published, the author is amazing for having such a unique idea, it could become a huge success."

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Blah

"I like that she has a sub side and a dim side. I would not recommend but it is good. That’s all I really have to say. I like it"

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In the middle

"Look forward to reading more "

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