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I LOVE IT

"Everything is spot on, to the punctuation, to the detail, and even to catching the characters personality's well. As a Hunter x Hunter anime watcher and a Hunter x Hunter fanfiction reader I can say that this is one if not the best fanfiction I have ever read on inkitt. I haven't been reading wattpad lately so I can't say it's one of the best compared to the wattpad fanfictions but I have 0 doubt that it's one of the best. Honestly I'm just suggesting maybe making the chapters a little longer if you can, I know the chapters are already pretty long but since I read a lot of really long chapter books I got used to it. It's totally fine if you can't/don't want to. Keep up the good work Bro! I can't wait to see the upcoming chapters!!"

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