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Amazing

"Your book is so amazing! I love it so much you are such a talented writer please write more! I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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So good, so much drama. Had my anxiety too high

"Such an amazing book. Kelley went through so much it was so heartbreaking. I literally held my breath every time she got dealt another bad blow. But I am happy that she got her happy ending. I am disappointed that Raymond got to live because he will continue to be a thorn in their side. It’s sad she won’t be able to have anymore children too. I’m hoping that changes for them. Still the ending was nice and sweet finally."

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Danielle

"Love it xx"

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d title is ok

"I would av loved it if Marc gets to know dat Raymond is his real father bt all d way hats off to u for writing such an incredible story"

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Nerve chilling

"So unpredictable the story is .. keeps u gripped"

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We are who we want to be

"I Disliked the way Kelly was trested, it was so heartbreaking. I Liked it when she finally found someone who loves her wholeheartedly "

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We are who we want to be

"I love your story, I am glad there's a happy ending for Kelly and Marc at the end. We all deserve happiness in our lives after all the hardships. Thank you"

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Wowzers

"Awesome in itself. Hot plot. Crazy dialogue. I loved it very much"

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Title

"I think I did this already"

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This was so amazing

"At first I didn't really understand Miranda and Raymond's role but as the book progressed it became a very intersting plot which I really enjoyed. There were many twist and turn and pop ups that were amazing."

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We Are Who We Want To Be...

"This book hit me right in my heart,its sad and cute. Love the plot and the characters too. Read both books in a day:)"

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I can't wait to see what happens next! I love this, and I really hope Kelly and Marc can be happy, they both deserve it. 😁

"I really want to know who got shot, and what exactly is going to happen, I mean Kelly and Marc have been through way to much, and I really hope they can be happy together. The only thing I have an issue with, is that Marc, he doesn't understand that Kelly didn't willingly get pregnant, and is making her feel like absolute crap about it, I mean, you can't blame her, when she had no choice. Also what's up with him saying he doesn't want to realise another man's child? NEWS FLASH BUDDY! YOU ALREADY DO! AND HER NAME IS DANI! I mean if he can think of Dani as his daughter, when it's actually, it's not it's Leo's and leo also isn't his dad, Raymond is! So he technically is going to have, two kids, that aren't his, but one of them, he won't love, even though it's technically his sister, but he'll love another man's child, UG! He seriously needs to get his priorities straight. Both of those kids are going to have one rough childhood, just saying. I feel horrible for those kids if Marc keeps up with the whole, "I'm not going to love/take care of another man's child!" I really really hope he stays to see things from Kelly's perspective, and stops hating get about it so frickin much. Either way I love this book, and I can't wait to read what happens next. 😁"

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Amazing

"AMAZING is all I have to say like girl continue "

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Fabulous

"There are more twist and turns I hoped for.. and its soo exciting.. I visualize it in my head and seems like movie"

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Not giving up.

"I was in tears when I finished reading the other one that decided not to read again then this title came up and I decided to read on. Your writing skill is awesome. I can't wait to what happens at the end. "

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Lots of twist n turns :)

"There's nothing boring about this story. I can't put it down it's amazing. :)"

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Who we are who we want to be

"I love the second book even more than the first! More plot twists and scandals but nonetheless intriguing and captivating "

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Free of dumb clichés, fresh story.

"Writer, let me lay my cards on the table —your blurb or description of this book as of June, 2019, is bringing your story down. The thing that got me hooked were the first four paragraphs of chapter 1. Kudos to you, not many authors can do that. That description though...lol"

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Nice story

"Nice story to spend some time with "

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Good

"I will recommend my older sister. This is easy and nice book for reading. "

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