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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect on Discord: flemingmichelle28"

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Love it!!

"I've read this twice already and this has become one of my top 3 books on this app! Very well written with an intriguing plot, I appreciated the depth put into this story and was captivated by the suspense of the unknown. I also enjoyed the dance between Chrissy and James as they got to know each other better building up to her discovery at the end! Can't wait for book # 2!! Please, please, please release it soon - as long as it's as well written and put together as this one! If not, I'll just be disappointed. To Ruby Medjo- Keep up the good work. And thank you for having a good command of the English language as well as grammar."

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Awesome

"Very suspenseful! I can feel my heart beating in my chest as insight comes."

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Vampire Mystery

"This story is so alluring and seductive. And so damn suspenseful! The author does a magnificent job of creating complex characters and plot that has your head spinning and your heart pounding! Love all your stories Ruby and I'm a huge fan. I hope you get off Patreon, for I refuse to support Patreon and publish soon! Can't wait. 💕"

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When Night Comes

"This is a fantastic read. I keep changing my mind as to who the demon is."

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Claimed

"I really enjoyed this book! Looking forward to finish it! 💕"

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When the night comes

"It’s very well written. The plot has a great storyline, the characters are amazing"

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Love it

"This book is so good love how the vampires are good and some are bad and a human girl falling for a vampire love it"

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Always amazing, keep writing

"I love this a lot! Like your other stories. A bit suggestion, I’d love to see James and Chrissy more and less of other players since they are the main story. Just like Maks and Aria."

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When night comes

"I find the book well written and the story engaging. The author’s descriptions allow me to visualise the story as it happens. I am looking forward to continue reading. This is the second book I have reading by the author and will certainly read more"

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When Night Comes

"It's very well written and has a fascinating story line. I was in love with this story after just the first few chapters. I hope there are more books like it."

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When night comes

"Good book. Kept my interest but open ended..where’s the rest?"

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Best book of this app

"I have never ever lived so much a book as I do now . Please, never stop writing."

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The BEST Vampire Book I’ve Red

"This is insanely good!!! I wish the author will update soon and finish this. I love all about this book. It’s perfect!!!! I never really love novel about vampire because usually it’s less interesting than werewolf since they are dead people but alive and so a lot of their movements are just not intriguing or too much of irrational set up that I need to make sense in my mind. Things to consider for improvement: - Christine >>>> I believe her character has a lot of opportunities to be improved. So far she’s likable. But I want to see more of her. It’s more interesting if James love her more because of who she is not just because of the blood. Perhaps show more of her kind or funny or whatever side that we, as readers, can say “oh, she’s lovable. No wonder he loves her to death” - Geraldine, Jenny, and other side characters >>>> I believe it’s better if you try to have more of their contributions in the story especially for Christine since they are tending to her needs or help her in some ways. - More romantic scene please 😆"

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Amazing

"Honestly, I find nothing wrong with this book, and that's saying a lot. I love books set in the past of corsets and carriages, and this books has swept me away into its world. I applaud the author."

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Amazing. Beautiful and fantastical

"I love the slow progress of her mellowing to James and I love how religion is viewed in this book. James being so careful with her yet also showing primal sides are sooo hot. The writing style is unbelievable. It's so descriptive and just ugh it's great."

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Suspenseful

"I rather like it. Good amount of suspense "

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Very well written

"This story is so well written and attention grabbing. I love the main characters, their personalities are so unique and in depth. It’s easy to picture the settings and interactions while reading with how descriptive the authors writing is. 10/10 would recommend."

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Yay review time!

"Hi, author! I accidentally stumbled on your book and holy shit am I glad I did! This is so good and exciting! Honestly, I should be working but I can't seem to put this book down. I'm absolutely loving the characters and how smoothly everything goes forward. I love your writing style, it's so refreshing and like it comes to you naturally, I don't know if I'm making any sense. I'm just so excited to read this book haha. Thank you for publishing this and writing this amazing piece, I can't wait to read more!💕💕💕 "

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When Night Comes

"Really enjoying this novel. Can't find it anywhere"

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