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LOVED IT!

"This story goes crazy, Sebastian pulling up out of nowhere with the creepy makeover and snatching Clary’s sketchbook. Wild."

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AMAZINGLY PERFECT

"Please continue writing as soon as you can i love this "

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AMAZONG

"Absolutely love the detail and matching style to the original series"

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Perfect

"This is such a good story please please please pleaseeee continue it!!!"

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please keep writing it!!!!

"I love this story IT is incredible. It has got me hooked on every word and I really really wish you keep writing it and tell us what happens next!!! PLEASE!!!"

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Captured

"I absolutely love this book. As a Mortal Instruments fan fiction, it perfectly captures all the characters in a twisted journey to save Clary and Jace, who have been kidnapped by Johnathan, aka Sebastian. With a perfect blend of romance and action, this book is perfect for any Cassandra Clare fan! "

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Amazing!

"It is an amazing story. The plot is genius and every thing about the story is wonderful! I am hooked."

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Brilliant

"Amazing"

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I loved this story!!!

"I loved this story...it had you now the edge of your seat the whole time while reading. I wish that the author could continue writing it."

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Great job!

"I love this novel so much, I was hooked all the way through! "

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Captured

"this book is very well written and has a plot that makes you want to continue reading."

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