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A Memorable Story

"This wonderful novel is still in the writing phase, so there are errors that a thorough edit could resolve, mainly lengthy paragraphs that should be broken up, but that did not detract from the overall read of the book. I grew attached to the characters and enjoyed their stories – a fine web of characters was drawn in this story. It flowed well and was easy to visualize due to the description and details. I also thought the blurb was very apropos. I have a similar character in one of my books and so it was enjoyable to read the trials and tribulations of this character. Keep writing!"

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