Bai Lang by Elsha at Inkitt
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Bai Lang

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Summary

Prostitute, prostituta, prostituée, baishunpu, jìnü. No matter which language it's still the same. A person who sells their body for a living more preferably a female. Bai Lang's body was used, abused and disease ridden when she died at the ripe age of thirty-seven. Transmigrated into the body of a child, not the legitimate born child but concubine born. All she seeks are all that was missing from her previous life: money, love, attention and power.

Genre
Romance,Drama
Author
Elsha
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
57
Rating
4.9 (24 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Characters

Bai Lang- Main character currently 10 years old

Lou Meng- Bai Lang's maid

Bai Si- Bai Lang's grandfather

Bai Kang- Bai Lang's father

Qu Rou Li- Bai Kang's Main wife

Yun Yi- Bai Kang's first concubine

Su Qing- Bai Kang's second concubine

Su Rou Xue- Bai Kang's third concubine and Bai Lang's mother

Bai Liu- Bai Lang's oldest sister 14 years old

Bai Sheng- Bai Lang's oldest brother 16 years old

Bai Wen- second brother 13 years old

Bai Nuo- second daughter 13 years old. Bai Wen's twin

Liang Yu- Bai Liu's husband

Su Yang- SRX's father

Su Madam- SRX's mother

Su Ran- SRX's niece

Zhao Wei-First Prince

Zhao Jun- Second Prince

Let Elsha know what you thought about this chapter!
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Shocking

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Good Writing

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Compelling Plot

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Strong Dialog

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author

Hi Elsha,

I just finished reading your story Bai Lang and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic.

I really loved the poignant moment in Chapter 1 when Bai Lang, a 10-year-old girl who has transmigrated into the body of a concubine-born child, reflects on her past life as a prostitute. Her desire for money, love, attention, and power is so vividly portrayed. It is ideal for making a comic as it captures a moment of deep introspection and emotional complexity that would translate beautifully into visual art.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic/manga. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.

You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Username - Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username - Eve_Verse) so we can bring the story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards,
Evee

a year
author

Hey,

I just finished reading your story and I really loved it. The characters felt so real and every scene kept me completely engaged. I also have a few ideas on how we could enhance it visually if you are open to exploring them.

a year

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