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What is your opinion?

FANTASTIC

"This is good for fiction because many people are diffrent and thats ok because evan though that the Tv cencors will keep it away from kids and others Its good to be diffrent (Why does this seeem sloppy???)"

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Wish there were a continuation

"Very cute! I really wish there was more though. I guess I'll wait for the next update. Very much like a bedtime story "

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