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Awesome story thanks

"Thanks for the awesome story"

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Amazing

"I love the book can’t wait to read more😊"

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Love

"🥺🦋😍 I'm out of words Emojies explain my feelings."

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Skater Cinderella

"I like how there are things that you didn’t see coming. Why is Will being mean to her? Do they end up together? Does her relationship with that wicked stepmom get better? I love the tutor of this too hopefully she gets to compete!"

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Scater Cinderella

"It's very good, I love the plot. However, I did catch a few grammar errors like the commas. Otherwise, I love it so far."

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Cinderella

"I really love this book but maybe if it had a bit more of a plot twist and the emotional scenes are a bit more emotional. I mean the secret admirer part is SOOOOO cute. I literally think its the best part along with Jordan secretly liking julia but i think that Tessa kinda forgave Will to easily. LOL this is one of the best modern cinderella books ive read. Keep up the good work! :))"

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Nyc but incomplete

"There's a really good plot to work on but personally as a reader I hate interruptions. This one feels like it's incomplete. I want to know what happened to Tessa in that skating competition. Did she went there to compete? Or what happened to her sister Julia, Jenna and her stepmother Jill. I want to know more about the ongoing chemistry between Tessa and Will. Otherwise the writing style was really good. I liked the plot and the characters Tessa and Will. "

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