Hard to Beat the Prequel

"I found this short story to be a little too short. Sharing the same gripe with its predecessor, there's too much buildup for an uneventful ending. I did appreciate that this one was more realistic, but even so, the ending again felt a little bit rushed. Some of the charming wit of the original has been lost here, although this was still an interesting read with an intriguing premise. Reminds me of the show Cobra Kai. Still is a good read that I'd recommend to nearly anyone, but I'm still left with a feeling of wanting something more."