Chapter Folake | A Woman In Red | Jiakka Chronicles #1 by dei at Inkitt
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A woman in red | Jiakka chronicles #1

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Summary

Blood. Bone and Tears. She was the meaning of fear. She was not made to be a dancer. An object. A pitiful Owieru. She was made to be a killer. After losing her father tragically, Folake Abiodun is forces to live in a dangerous world filled with the magickal Jiakka, a world where her blind self would be first seen as a burden than an asset, and a world where no matter what, she would never be like the rest. This thought will tear her. This thought will end her. But no matter what, she will always be a girl in a world filled with monsters and magick far more powerful than she could ever dream to be. Or so she thought.

Status
Complete
Chapters
30
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Folake


Whenever I imagine my mother, I envision her as a pure, burning white. Thatโ€™s the only colour she emits and I have marked that as her emblem. My father radiates many colours, the silver glow of the moon illuminating him as a crystalline sapphire when he sits outside in the dead of the night taking in the peace and serenity of it. A bright red when heโ€™s angry. A series of revolving orange and yellows whenever he converses with his mother. A faint blue whenever he tries to cook.

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Right now, as we raced through the greens of the landscape, he radiates a slightly opaque grey.

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Although I physically cannot see, I am blessed with a kind of sight the sighted normally call Owieru, which means sight by colour.

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My father holds my right hand, leading me through the forest. Our feet rest limply on broken twigs as he continues to walk forward, no sign of stopping evident.

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Listen with your soul, I imagine my motherโ€™s cold voice, people talk more with their soul than with word of mouth.

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I secure my silk cloak over my hair as we move forward. Gunshotโ€™s ring through the air, and I feel my heel hit a marshy substance, probably, in this situation, a dead body.

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My fatherโ€™s colour slowly changes to a bright red as we move forward quietly. The energy of souls around me is at burning point, many have died here.

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โ€œFather-โ€

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My father clasps his rough palm onto my lips, and hisses, โ€œDo not say a word, Folake. Do you wish to get us killed?โ€

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I shake my head, and my father releases his palm, walking forward. I hear the close shriek of a gryphon. My father must hear it as well, because his grip on my arm tightens. I listen as he forms a ball of flames in his palm and holds it out like a torch, lighting up the path.

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โ€œStay close to me, Folake.โ€

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โ€œok.โ€

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I grip his cloak with my second arm, securing mine better. The woods of Gaia are not a favourable place to be in the dead of night. Many creatures lurk behind the shadows, mythical beasts one normally would have never have seen in town.

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My father told me stories of war in the white peopleโ€™s land, and how the gods blessed us with strange powers to break the iron shackles the white man put on us.

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There were some of us that could control water, others that could command fire (much like my father,) some could call on spirits to do their bidding and others could weld metal or use nature to their advantage.

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We called ourselves the Jiakka, which in our tongue means the blessed. Some of the less fortunate Jiakka did not have a certain power, but could use our tongue to call the gods through spells.

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โ€œStay here, Folake.โ€ My father commands, shoving me into a tight space in-between large oak tree. He glows now an escalating series of red, which shows me his anger.

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โ€œIf I donโ€™t come back, what do you do?โ€

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โ€œPapa. . .โ€

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โ€œWhat do you do, Folake?โ€ he spits, half angry, half frustrated.

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โ€œI save myself.โ€ I finally say, tears dotting my dark brown eyes. He stands up and I hear his leather boot connect with the grass. โ€œThatโ€™s right, Folake. If anything happens to me, if I donโ€™t come back, you must run. Because if the white man gets you, youโ€™re as good as dead.โ€

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He doesnโ€™t wait for my reply, walking away. The sound of his boots against grass slowly fades away until all is silent. The mind-numbing silence continues on, a void stretching for hours and hours, miles and miles, in every single direction.

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There is no life around me. No colours to sense. Just an empty, mind numbing black.

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Then, like light through the darkness, a devilish shriek rings out through the forest, scattering Panuma birds that glow bright pink from their trees. I turn to my left and make out the swelling mass of a gryphon, its body radiating a thousand signals at once, a second red, then the next blue, the other purple and maybe a tint of orange after.

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It stretches open its mouth and bites down and the sound of its mighty jaws clamping echoes through the trees.

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A manly cry for help reverberates through the forest as animalโ€™s scatter past me. I grab the horns of a River Panther but it pushes me down to the muddy ground. Lizards, deer and a phoenix with a bright coloured aura swoops right above me, expelling cold air as it rushes by.

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โ€œFather!โ€ I yell, and a soul with vibrant energy runs through me. It speaks with a cold, commanding voice.

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โ€œGet out of here.โ€

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The gryphon spreads its wings and rushes down with a burning hatred against me, its thick, spiked fangs bared and ready to kill.

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โ€œGet out of there!โ€

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The voice screams this time, and I stagger backwards, letting the creature crack its fangs on the muddy ground. I make a run for it, but I hear it advance towards me.

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Run, Folake, I tell myself, urging my legs to move faster. Run!

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The gryphon swoops towards me again for another round of food, the sound of its jaws shutting and reopening echoing through the forest.

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โ€œHelp!โ€ I scream, almost hitting a tree but swerving just in time. โ€œHelp me!โ€

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A warm hand pulls me front the front of the creature and to the side of a tree. The woman holds me tight as the gryphon rushes by us, pushing autumn struck leaves into the air.

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โ€œCome, Folake.โ€ She says, guiding me away from the beast. I hear the trickle of water and I bend down in front of the bank, washing my face with water.

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My fatherโ€™s gone, and itโ€™s all my fault.

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The woman places her palm on my shoulder, sending an icy shiver through me. I turn around, her aura has completely changed.

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A swirling vortex of dark, evil colourโ€™s makes up her blurred shape, and I stagger backwards, my thumb exposed to the rushing water.

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โ€œCome on, Folake.โ€ She cackles, โ€œOr do you want to end up like your mother dearest?โ€

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