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Interesting tale

"Great story interesting twist on a mermaid tale. I hope you create a sequel. Thank you for sharing your talents with us read."

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The sirens song

"I love how this story is written and the plot. The characters are amazing. It could be better if Thelea had som more growth, maybe learned things quickly "

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THE SIRENS CALL

"Hi Dear, Good morning,,your story is great...any update on this?"

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Good

"Good story "

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The Siren's Call

"It was really good. A little repetitive sometime and i wish Thelea had a little bit more maturity rather than child like mentality. I could probably benefit the story to keep the naivety but still make her seem like an 18 yr old not a child. But overall it was an amazing read."

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Best mermaid book!

"I’m really enjoying this story"

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Good Story

"Have loved this story so far and hope it continues."

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The Siren's Call

"Your story got me hooked. I love your take on sirens and on water goddess. I also love how the story is going. I can't wait to see more of Draven and Thelea develop throught."

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The sirens call

"I love love love this so far! Please update soon ☺️☺️"

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It may have dragged but it was bomb and colourful

"I chose this rating because I was a bit disappointed on how Draven's POV went because it was just a third person POV focusing on Draven... Well that's the only flaw. Plot is bomb, writing style is lit "

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Interesting

"Nice write up"

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