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Summary

A girl totally broken inside.A girl pure as water but why is she still hated.Hated by her own parents.Still moving on hoping something good will come. The oldest child of her parents.Hated because she has different thoughts.The story of a child completely torn and broken inside.

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Complete
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1
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Age Rating
13+

Broken

Once there was a girl,who had a soul as pure as water.She was cheerful for a very short while.She was happy when she was young but things changed when she became older.Her parents turned against her,they would show a little love to her but the other were more precious to them.The other two were praised by their parents while that one girl would always be scolded because she had different interests.Her parents would never believe her even though she was always honest but they believed the others who were there to see her cry.That one girl would never cry in front of her parents because they will scold her even for crying so she just cried herself to sleep but no one knew she was broken because she always wore a smile.All the fault was on her parents but the child never accepted.She felt like she was not good enough.She wanted to run away to a place that has peace away from them so she can finally breathe.

They never encouraged her but always insulted her that she wasn't good enough.She cried and begged her lord to help her.Everyone was against her so she never trusted anyone.They would always break her.Why?Why is the world like that?Why can't i have different interests?Why can't someone have different thoughts?Why can't people appreciate someone?Why?Why am i like this? Please someone who can feel my heart,someone who can feel my pain.Someone who can hear me.Come and answer me.Please save me.Come and tell me I'm good enough.Come and hug me so tight that all my broken parts stick back together so i can finally smile.

So i can say I'm not BROKEN.

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