What is your opinion?
OPEN FOR DISCUSIONS
"This is a compelling and confident opening. I admire the restraint—you allow the mystery to unfold quietly rather than forcing drama. That creates a deeper kind of tension. Pixie’s rational self-examination stood out to me. She isn’t written as confused in a chaotic way but as someone methodically assessing her condition. That detail gives her intelligence and dignity, which makes the amnesia feel more psychological than merely physical. The idea that memory loss could be masking something significant is especially intriguing. It opens the door to questions about identity, protection, and perhaps even manipulation. Those themes always fascinate me in speculative fiction. I’m very curious to see where you take this—whether the loss of memory is accidental, defensive... or intentional. Looking forward to reading more. "
Thrilling
"Wow I loved it. It's very thrilling.....👌👌👌"
Harmony
"I loved not liked the plot of the story. Its really entertaining and captures you attention. I recommend this to readers looking to find a great book to sit and read. I rated this book five stars because it was certainly deserving it and it was really awesome. The writer has done a remarkable job especially with grammar and punctuation. Congrats to you and keep on writing."
A Worth-reading Book!
"The first time I read this book, I was completely lost but slowly brought to understanding everything. Then I figured out that that's the way Scott, as an author successfully made me as a reader go into the story as if I were there. I couldn't predict the plot at all, but I was always made eager to keep reading and find out more. The more I read, the more exciting it got. Plus, his writing is very well written, and it's comfortable to read. I recommend this book to everyone!"
Intriguing and Fun!
"The plot is great and you were able to pull the reader in to wander and explore the new world along with the main character. The amnesia and strange feelings mixed with exploring a strange, new place worked well and helped to make me want to learn more about where she was and what had happened to her. Keep writing and posting chapters!"
Nice!
"I really liked this. Very different from what i usually read,. Some nice visuals and the characters were all easy to like. I wanted to go live in this world so much at the end. Great job!"
Harmony
"The story is build up very nice and really was exiting for long perods. The end is to much harmony to my taste to be really satisfying. So much harmony and the total lack of challanges seem not human to me. And, as one who was young in the 1970ies, I'd still prefer to change people and to save old terra instead of going to another dimension. Old terra is just too beautiful to leave it with all its animals and plants and humans to greed and destruction."
