Very Grand

"At first, I was intimidated by the length of the story, but when I started reading, I was transfixed! All the characters were strong and unique, especially Raquel. Her actions and attitude were believable in the situation and the ending was very satisfying without coming across as too rushed. If there's any critique I would give this, it would be to see where there could be more foreshadowing, because some things, like the tunnel, did seem to just pop out of nowhere."