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The meadow that lies between

"I like the story so far, I hope the writer can update more and faster 😁"

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The meadow that lies between

"So good story!! I'm crying at the end and cant wait to read the next one, great work!!❤👍😁"

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Isbol

"A must read. But wish the story was longer. "

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Ttttttttt

"Good story line "

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Very good

"Very good and interesting "

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Nice

"I am liking the story plot so far "

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😊😊ghmnh

"mmhd dhd fld"

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Interesting

"Not a bad story I may say "

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The Meadow that Lies Between

"Looking forward to the next chapter. Characters are lovable"

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Loved this

"Short , sweet and I enjoyed it"

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The Meadow that Lies Between

"It was a good story. But I didn't like the way it ended."

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The kingdom

"This is one amazing book sorry I got the title wrong lol"

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Lovely

"Lovely book. Short but captivating and really naught. Liked it"

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The Meadow that Lies Between

"Well for one it was a great story i have no complaints all the way until i get to the end, The ending however sucks it could have gone on longer and showed how they grew more together running both kingdoms maybe heirs anything would have been better than this. Again i loved the story but the ending was a complete disappointment."

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Good read but dissatisfied with the length it truly is .

"To make this seem longer you make it to where the reader has to scroll one full page to go to the next its annoying and stupid to do . your book is how you write it no need to make it seem as what its not so what if you have short chapters as long as they are good chapters. Keep up the good work stop with the blank pages and id rate it better"

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The Medow That Lies Between

"Amm... I don't know where to begin... 🤔 The concept of the story was pretty great 👍 I was into it but... the chapters short and most of them was written about was "adult" stuff. The plot went really fast (too fast for my taste). Wish there were more story telling about the events that happend not only their love making 🤪. And the cliff hanger at the end... will there be second story? Or is it the end? Don't get angry at me it's just my opinion and sugestion so you can write better stories in the future. Good luck! 😊😁👍"

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The ending was unexpected and look uncompleted

"The story was really interesting deferent from normal story. About women freedom, independence and respect. However the writing style constantly switch between pov style and third person story tellers. But still this point can not stop you from reading the story. The story start romantic erotic , get to the women right, then end to tragic death. Only the last part as tragic all part make sense. I would put the guess the point is to put the two lingthem together and she and her husband become king and queen for both territory. But in this story they didnt proof their capabilities as leader and politics. With out her father suport they could loos the game. Also if the king can have a control on his own alpha how can he controle other territory's alpha. I didnt see the point of his father death. The end was open . I feel sorry for her mother. I mean yeah that means two kingdom will combine but what's the point of killing his father in the story? The end of the story like start of second one or it can could be the end was a rushed story. The biting Anyhow except the last few chapter, I love the other part. I cant put comment on grammar because english is my second language, but I can tell you some sentences pretty much lost me so I had to skip it to next paragraph. But still I could make connection. Thx for story."

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ALPHA

"A relaxing read"

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Xxxxxxx

"Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx"

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Meadow

"Very interesting story "

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