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What is your opinion?

Don’t Go

"From the little I have read, it sounds like it will be an exciting, interesting and enjoyable story. I can’t wait to read more chapters. "

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His to take

"So far the story is gripping and interesting. Makes hood reading. Living the story. I can not wait to read the rest. Interruption is irritating "

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Love it so far

"It’s very good so far"

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Don't go

"Interesting book so far."

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Don't go

"Not bad I love every bit of it"

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Don't Go

"Love love love!!!"

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Don't go

"The grammar is very well arranged"

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Vgghhhh

"Where's the 11th chapter "

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Good

"Iiked the story"

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Aanya

"It's good... But somewhere I found lack of link between characters"

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High on emotions

"I cried a lot. I generally can’t read through melancholy and heartache. But I couldn’t keep the book away. I loved it. "

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My reaction

"I really liked the story overall but I wish that it hadn’t made me cry !😂 throughout the whole sort I was hoping that Yolanda would at least let him see his son one last time before his death or maybe comforted him before she left "

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Spicy book

"The guy is a bit rough and tough but I like the spunk of the girl. Very interesting "

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At his mercy

"I like the charectors Dislike the whole contract thing coz it's also done in 50 shades"

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1234

"Very interesting "

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Interesting

"Interesting book "

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Blind obedience

"It’s arousing! Where’s the rest of the story? "

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This was beautiful

"i love the concept of the book it has deeper meaning only issues were in transition otherwise it was a creative work of art ❤️❤️🔥🔥"

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Crazy

"It is ok !!!!!"

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Unknown

"Not sir ewhat its all about"

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