What is your opinion?
Parody 12 days of christmas
"The personalities are defined, character traits and plot are capturing. There are quite a few grammar errors, missing words, some spelling mistakes, using plural when it should be singular in the prologue. I think the story would be interesting if continued and made a full book."
12 days
"Nice piece of humorous parody. 12 days of Christmas lends itself to this very well, and this does point out the dark side of frustration that can go along with Law enforcement anywhere. I laughed myself silly the fist time through, and then thought about it, and understood a little better how easily we forget what our boys in blue put up with. The next chapters show a number interesting ideas, but I love the Haiku chapter. This shows a true understanding of this poetry form. Thought provoking!"
