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Loyd Prequel

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Summary

He knows he’s abnormal, but will he understand why? Or what made him his way? Will he figure it out on his own, or will he need friends? Tok. Tok Tok! He’s got weird things happening now. Random people showing up, things haunting him, following him and dad has never been around. He could be dead for all he cares. This is someone, or something, that you shouldn’t dare mess with. But idiots do try. People seem inviting, but pushy. Others... rude, obnoxiously insulting, but... fun to hang around though they’re bossy. Challenges come his way, monsters, frenamies, and maybe even family. Can he understand he isn’t normal any more? He is told everything that is told to everyone and still doesn’t get it. A girl is important to him. Did he know her, or understand her? He can’t. He doesn’t even understand himself! He meets a giant, a titan, and a bee. He fears failing his team, and he did so in many minor attempts, and he can’t afford to any more. His job depends on it, the people depend on it for their house electricity, water, and food. His friends and sister depend on him. If he fails he’s dead meat... to everything. Especially his relationships with his friends. But he doesn’t realize that’s not what they look at. Their Christians like him, and look on the inside, not the outside. Can he take the pressure? Or beat the clock? Tik, Tok! (Series Set-up)

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

You may not understand how the story ends. But you need not worry. We will help you understand. Though the chapters are short, you have a chance. But if you think you’ll get much out of this for future training, your wrong. This is a story that will make you think that you should be a kid that fits in at school, but stands out at home where it’s safe. In other words, don’t use this as a reminder saying, “Hey go kill yourself, it sound fun!” ‘Cause your putting words in my mouth, and that isn’t any fun. Good luck!


He was irrated. He hated his job. He walked around the same neighborhood since 3 a.m, yelling “ Mail! Come get your mail Ellie Hobskins!” He had blood red hair blotched with sweat, so it looked brown. A red and green Christmas UPS uniform was covered in Christmas tree lights that were rainbow. He had soft orange eyes like a sunset, but a hint of stone hard green hid beneath it all. He was pulling around a wagon 2 feet tall, with 7 stacks of boxes 10 feet high falling in the middle of the road. He groaned.

“ I don’t understand why life isn’t fair!” He screamed at his neighbors that afternoon. He still had to go out and deliver another thousand boxes before the day was over. He couldn’t understand.


“Loyd? Is that you? The corn...” Mother was cut off by a thought.

Then, from the other room, a voice solid and demanding said, “ I want my bed made, my b&b, and milk NOW!” It was Steven.

“ I got it mom.” Loyd got 1 glass of milk, and breakfast cooked with a can of beer in the middle.

“ Here. And don’t talk to mom that way anymore. She does so much for you and you treat her like dirt. So... easy up on her. Please?” Loyd said calmly.

“Ok.” He replied.

“Tha-”

“She’s NEVER done ANYTHING nice for me! Don’t tell me to easy up on her again.” He said angrily.

He took a drink of milk and fell asleep because of a certain potion that Loyd thought wasn’t going to work. He put straps over his forearms, ankles, wrists, stomach, shoulders, thighs, and knees.

He woke up with a start of, “SHE’S DONE NOTHing,” He paused. “WHAT!?!?!?”

He yelled at Loyd the whole time he walked out. He ran into his sister LoLa, and she grabbed him and started crying.

“What’s wrong LoLa?” She looked up with her brown eyes, yellow hair, and heart shaped face with a strip of red running down her face.

“LoLa! What happened?!”

“He-Steven-Slapped me-With-A belt-On-Mmy face!” She said through slobs and shrieks of pain.

“It’s alright. Let’s get you fixed up.” Loyd looked down, and her knee was busted up.

“L-LoLa?”

“It hurts!” She wailed.

“Come on.”

He took her to the kitchen where their mom was, and she shook her head disappointed. Loyd took her to the bathroom while she screamed as he dabbed her knee.

Her brown eyes pleaded through agony for Loyd to stop. But he didn’t. He didn’t want her to get infected. By

Steven.

Once she was good to go, she got some ice cream. Loyd stomped into the room Steven was in. He froze once he was in the door. Steven wasn’t in there. Loyd had a strange idea to pull on something above him and punch whatever it was on the cheek. So he did.

He felt something leathery, and yanked. it was a belt, attached to Steven. And he punched him in the face.

He screamed. “Did you have thousands of wasps or bees or what ever in your hand ready to set loose on me?!” His face was swollen.

“N-no! I wouldn’t do that!” He yelled. “Even though I hate you.” He whispered to himself.

He saw a glowing light with yellow and black stripes fade away.

Then he ran out and left him there.

“Mom! Look at this!”

And she saw just before it was gone.

“Get your sister and get in the car.”

Loyd went and got her. He held her.

“What’s going on big broter?” She said very quietly.

“I don’t know. Mom won’t say anything. She just said, ‘Get your sister and get in the car.’”

She whimpered.

They walked to the car and hopped in. It was blue on the outside with purple, blue, red, orange, and yellow flames. It had black leather seats on the inside. It was absolutely beautiful. I just didn’t understand, why we had to get in the car at this very moment, for this strange reason.
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I know this is my book, and if you read it in book form it is all messed up, but I promise you all I still enjoy reading it

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