Inkitt
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Love this and i am so invested right now.😍

" I liked Nan and Melissa and the Shoe store. I also like the way you portray Nadia and her personality. The Bad Boys Club are really mysterious would like to find out more about them especially Caleb and if he is apart of them and how did he show up so quickly when Melissa fell 🤔. The shape of the boulder at Shelby Falls is also very interesting how weirdly it looks. Would like to know how Nadia's first day of school went and how everyone treated her the next day. Overall really love this and would like you to finish it or add more chapters please🙏🏻😁"

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Absolutely Brilliant

"I would recommend this to anyone, it's funny, wholesome and intriguing. Plus I added a new word to my vocabulary 😜 I cannot wait fir the next chapter 😃"

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