Inkitt
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Amazing!

"I absolutely love it! The plot is amazing and I look forward to reading the next chapters... Keep up the amazing writing! :)"

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"I'm finally reading this!! You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App."

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Cdcky

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Element Undecided

"That was on of the best stories I have EVER read. You are an amazing writer. You have an awesome imagination. Keep writing your stories and you'll be the best. XoXo - Mya_Zabini"

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I don't have a writing review.

"I just loved this so much and wanted to boost it."

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Updates please

"the story is good, just a few grammatical slips, but that happens to everyone when they are nervous. the plot is developing nicely, and i am eagerly awaiting more"

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Cool

"Cool Cool Cool Cool"

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Elemental Undecided

"I love the story. I'm surprised the parents only knew about 3 elementals, when in reality, there are 4 and Dakota is.coming into tjose powers! I can't wait for updates. โค"

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Elemental Undecided

"I love the story. I can't wait to see whats next"

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Magic

"Love it wish was more of the story but love the writer "

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10/10 would recommend

"I love this so much I want to know if there is a book 2 because Iโ€™ll be really sad if it actually ends at chapter 19"

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LOVED

"I liked when it explains her powers of attacking the aliens, I just imagine her doing all of it at the last chapter but it was awesome"

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Elementql undecided

"Love the charqcter. I dont normally do reviews but this one deserved it."

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Yay

"I like this book please add more to the story please love it so much thanks for making it๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›"

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Elemental undecided

"This book definitely holds your interest it doesn't start off slow and it gets right into the story great writing"

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Elemental Undecided

"Only half way through this book. The story is engaging but a little over the top."

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Elemental undecided

"Its cool. Fun educating and overall a page turner. Nice plot"

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