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"I enjoy reading the book repeatedly and never bored wish it was complete , I recommend books from this author. Hoping for new chapters."

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"I love this story one of the best I’ve ever read I wish there was more of it and bonus chapters"

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This book is amazing!

"The witty sarcasm and the banter between Ryder and Nicky is hilarious, and the plot twists and turns a lot. Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised anymore at anything. But overall, give this book a read- it's definitely worth it!"

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Must Read!! Great story

"Love this story s o far. Enjoy your plot line and comedy mixed with seriousness!! Great story so far. Definitely recommended to friends to read. "

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Fabulous

"Looking forward to more updates soon "

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So far so good

"So far I like the plot and the banter but a lot of it doesn't make sense. I suppose that is the lure though! Can't wait to read more"

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"I love this story! It jumps in really quickly, but you explain what is happening in an unique and intriguing way. I also love Ryder's snark! I really, really enjoyed it!"

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Don't remember

"Cool, nice one"

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