Baby Theory

"I love the idea of Percabeth getting together because of a baby, but I didn't like that Luke disappeared. It would have been better if Aphrodite had taken Luke away and THEN given him back to Percabeth. Overall, it's a classic. I like the idea, but it would have been better if Annabeth had worn the clothes Silence gave her, and you had described the baby making. Um."

Very nice

"I really love your writing style and I must say, this is one of the few Percabeth very original fanfics. Keep up the good work!"

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Baby theory

"The plot was a little spotty. I really don’t agree with how you made Aphrodite give the baby. But that is just my opinion and don’t take it to heart. I also don’t like how Luke was going to disappear "

The Baby Theory

"What the heck is going on in the story I don't really get it"