Inkitt
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"This story touched every part of my emotions. I even found myself siding with the bad guys at times. It was almost scary to see how everything was justified through each character's emotions, as though the only true villain is the person you are inside. Hope there is more to come!"

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"I must say, I was a bit worried at first. But as I read on, it gained my full attention. This really builds up as the story progresses. Every chapter made me want to read on to see what else was in store. This was not your typical super hero story. It was a very human story that has lots of legs."

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