Inkitt
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I like it

"I can't connect with the people in the story, not enough back story, jumps around. I like were some sense of getting thing more together. Teaming up for the long haul."

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Very jumpy

"Good but very jumpy.I wish they would focus on one person. Their vocabulary sucks and story is discombobulated."

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A Great Read.

"This story is a refreshing new take on a popular subject. The perspective of kids telling this story about a very adult problem was certainly interesting to go through, and the general development of the plot was nicely paced, not too quick or too slow. It has become a favorite of mine to keep up on, I highly suggest it!"

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The great plague

"Could use more expressions. A lot of repetition. Good book to read when bored. "

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