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Summary

ALERT!! It's getting under edit...!!! Edited 'til chapter 7! Leonard Del Martines a Neuro Surgent in the daylight and a Serial Killer in the night lights. Crystal Jonarity is a Psychologie University Student who is unable to feel feelings related to her past... But due to an accident, she started to feel them again and now she is trying to learn them... By observing people's expressions and acts... When both met at a Classical Bar where Crystal works as a part-timer. For the first time, she finds someone who is mysterious enough to make him her observation subject... Along with the mystery, secrets and curiosity Crystal started to developed her own feelings... But what will happen when Leonard finds out that Crystal knew about his identity since the first time she saw him? Discover that along with Crystal and Leonard in a maze full of mystery, curiosity and feelings...

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
12
Rating
3.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Introduction

Chapter O: Introduction.

“I’m stuck in a place where Loyalty is just a Tatto, Love is just a Quote, and Lies are the Truth.” -Unknown-

Writing my first mini-novel was the only way that I had to escape the reality of this existing place. A place where everything looked like if you touch it it will collapse.

“Reality is for people who lack imagination.”

I am always and forever will be proud of my imagination for being always there for me.

“This world, only two types of people exist, The ones who steal and The ones who are stolen from. I suggest you choose which way you want to live before others chose for you.”

The main point is that you need to choose your destiny at least a part of it before destiny chooses it for you.

“You stabbed me, and I apologized for getting blood on your shirt.”

Always thinking of coming up with a new strategy of killing people. Spending my most time killing thousand of people inside my mind. And, still... not enough to vent all of this unknown anger...

If someone ever heard the thoughts I’ve got I am pretty sure I will end up inside a mental hospital.

“You don’t need water just to drown, do you?”

Who knows? I am already drowning in my thoughts I don’t need any water anymore.

“You can complain because roses have thorns or rejoice because thorns have roses.”

In the end, it’s all up to you to choose.

“For the second we are born, we start dying. So this isn’t life. This is death.”

A person once told the total opposite of it. Yet, that person ends up suicide in the end.

“No one really cares until something dramatic happens.”

That’s the human being. Even if that happens they will just pass by you and treat you like an invisible person and they even end up judging you for being easy prey for the hunter.

About this novel, it will show how many masks can a person wear and how to master your playing with them.

It’s just like, in the place of asking ‘Who is the killer?’ ask ‘Who is next?’.

Finally, many may not comes this far. Yet, may this novel lack the touch of the profession... may not has an attractive plot to start with and interesting ideas... To me, it will always remain as one of the best things that happened to me.

My first novel, my first try, and my first step.

And to the ones who come this far, Thank You so much.

I hope you enjoy it. Leave a comment if you don’t like any part of it. I will be grateful. ¨v¨

From the soon-to-be-the forgotten author Gardenia.

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their loss

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I'm a writer too by the way!

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why don't we become writing buddies or something?? if you'd like that ofcourse :))

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