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Beautifully Written

"This is only a prologue so far, but the synopsis is titillating and the writing is almost profound. The character building is well thought out and you can physically feel this is going to be an incredible story. I wholeheartedly hope this continues in the vein it started off in, and concludes many, many chapters later just as beautifully... ... and maybe a tad bit dirty ;) "

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