What is your opinion?
Not as light as you may think at the first moment
"It is a great story which takes you on a fantasy stroll and it brings you into many side mysteries on its way :)"
Love love love
"Also love this story. It has me hooked already! Can’t wait to find out more."
Tide Changes
"Good story so far."
Good
"Well this was surprising started the book not knowing if I’d like it and in like 2 hours already read all the chapters very good "
tide changes
"there are a few small parts where the reading doesnt quite track properly but im enjoying the plot so much it really doesnt matter. love the book and cant wait to read more"
I like the plot most and i wish to read ahead.
"I feel the writer is using the characters at there fullest and also know each and every one of them clearly. I am in love of Dylan."
My Review
"So far I have loved your story. You create characters that are loveable and a really fast-paced plot. You hardly add any filler in and just get straight to it. However, I personally would have liked a few fillers to enhance the characters' development and to be able to grow more fond of them. I love your writing style, it is easy to understand and paints movies in my mind. However, sometimes, there are quite a few typos that confused me at times. I suggest reading over the chapter before publishing it if you have time to allow the readers a more smooth read. I believe if you read over it, you will be able to not only fix typos but add finer details into the story and its character. Overall I am in love with this story, every chapter enchants me and teleports my imagination into the world of this book. I love how animate the characters feel. They feel real, not fake and definitely not stereotypical I love a good fantasy, historical, reverse harem story with a strong, independent female lead. I would love it if you keep writing, you inspire to read more since I have fallen out of reading in the past years. Thank you for creating a book that allows me to have a vivid imagination and falls under all of my favorite genres."
