What is your opinion?
Cute Story
"So far this story is pretty good. I think the little date was really simple and cute (I don't want to give any spoilers for those who read reviews, so I won't go into too many details). I was a little confused on how Hoseok and Josie knew Yoongi when they brought him up in the conversation in the car, but when they (Hoseok and Yoongi) were meeting, it was as if they were meeting each other for the first time. There are some grammar errors, but nothing too serious. I can understand what you were trying to get across. Other than that, It's a cute story! I would love to see more :)"
Not Bad
"The spelling, grammar, capitalization, and punctuation, sorry to say this, but they are all bad. Im being honest not mean, so don't take this the wrong way. You have periods and commas in places they aren't supposed to be. There are lowercase letter at the beginning of some of your sentences. There are extra letters added to some of your words, which makes the sentence sound wrong. If you want you can ask me about my social media, so I can give you tips. That is, whenever you need some help on something."
