What is your opinion?
Great story!
"It's a great story hopefully the author continues with story. The plot of the story is different from the others and that's what I like the story."
Great book
"You monster!!! With her permission you mark her"
Loving the story
"Loving it even though The Alpha's character is quite intimidating"
It’s okay
"It has a good plot, but it needs to be edited, the grammar, punctuation, and the spelling is really bad. "
My review
"You have a very interesting story. The only fault I found while reading it, was that the grammar was poor. But since this is the first draft it is understandable. Continue writing.👍👍 "
Bruh
"If I could give the technical writing skills 0 stars I would. Sorry if that’s rude, but fix it."
Nice story pity about the mistakes
"The author has to do some SERIOUS editing. Fix grammatical, spelling and punctuation issues. Not to mention incorrect word usage and missing letters. Apologies for the harshness but this needs to be fixed ASAP! "



