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Beautiful

"We need an update please"

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amazing story

"pls update soon"

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Love

"I loved this entire book. I loved the characters and their roles played."

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Great story

"I like everything About this story and thanks that you didn’t let Carlos kill Eva I would’ve stopped reading the story thumbs up 👍🏻 to you can’t wait for the next update...I’m so much in love with this story that when I was reading another one and got the notifications that it has been updated,I stopped that one and came to finished this one"

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Great book

"This book has humor and drama love and action mixed together it's a great read. Keep it up"

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great book

"i need this in paperback "

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Good story

"Not sure about Eva's age..isn't she underage? "

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Come back...

"Omg.... please come back. I need to know what happens next. Loving this story. "

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Good

"I really loved the story but why kept the dark side of Carlos or has he always been good? If yes then I really love the story but the translation didn’t really went well For the love I have for Carlos I hope she and Eva ends up together he should be able to forgive her but I really blame her for not confining in Carlos I mean someone who has devoted his life to safe you from the very first day you met him, come on🤦🏻‍♀️ I’m disappointed in Eva for betraying Carlos but she should be prepared to face the consequences."

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Hired

"Wow I can't believe I just finished this book But seriously Mr Author we need update its great story can't wait to see where the plan of Eva will go and what would happen if Carlos get to everything and as for Antonio and Gabriel can't wait to read how they would end 😊😊😊"

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