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What is your opinion?
Frost and feathers
"Nice one. I like the way you bring each character to live and the way you explain and express each detail in the story. I would gladly recommend this story to others. BTW your title selection is amazing"
Writer follows the rules of English grammar, but now it's time to break them.
"Lovely. The writing style is using the passive voice, which can be fixed with little tweaks here and there. Reads robotic at times, but the plot is what keeps this whole thing together. "
