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Wonderful

"I like the description of the woods. Liking the small suspense you’ve put us in from the ending of this chapter. Keep up the good work!"

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Needs work, made pretty well

"Hoping to see more of your work. Be sure to proofread found some errors but other than that it’s great!"

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Needs a few tweaks but good overall!

"Pretty good. Could use some work but good job!"

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